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  You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。    

  题目:    

  Where are we going?    

  A boat docked in a tiny Mexican village。 An American tourist plimented the Mexican fisherman on the quality of his fish and asked how long it took him to catch them。 “Not very long;” answered the Mexican。    

  “But then; why didnt you stay out longer and catch more?” asked the American。    

  The Mexican explained that his small catch was sufficient to meet his needs and those of his family。    

  The American asked; “But what do you do with the rest of your time?”    

  “I sleep late; fish a little; play with my children; and take a siesta with my wife。 In the evenings; I go into the village to see my friends; play the guitar; and sing a few songs。。。I have a full life。”    

  The American interrupted; “I have an MBA from Harvard and I can help you! You should start by fishing longer every day。 You can then sell the extra fish you catch。 With the extra revenue; you can buy a bigger boat。 With the extra money the larger boat will bring; you can buy a second one and a third one and so on until you have an entire fleet of trawlers。 Instead of selling your fish to a middle man; you can negotiate directly with the processing plants and maybe even open your own plant。 You can then leave this little village and move to Mexico City; Los Angeles; or even New York City! From there you can direct your huge enterprise。”    

  “How long would that take?” asked the Mexican。 “Twenty; perhaps twentyfive years;” replied the American。 “And after that?”    

  “Afterwards? Thats when it gets really interesting;” answered the American; laughing。 “When your business gets really big; you can start selling stocks and make millions!”    

  “Millions? Really? And after that?”    

  “After that youll be able to retire; live in a tiny village near the coast; sleep late; play with your children; catch a few fish; take a siesta; and spend your evenings enjoying your friends!”    

  审题:    

  在本书的大作文中,我们不仅为大家提供了图画题和图表题,还提供了一些比较特殊的题目,比如这篇看文章写作。我们这样做,不仅因为国外考试中有类似的形式,更重要的是想拓宽大家的视野,提高大家的应变能力。    

  该题目先给出了一篇极富哲理的三百余字的短文,而后提出了三点要求,简述该故事;阐释其中含义;给出你的评论。这篇文章可以分成三段来写:第一段是简要地重述该故事;第二段阐释含义并作出评论;最后一段是结语。    

  Sample:    

  In the above story; an American tourist wishes to turn a Mexican fisherman into a millionaire so that the latter can enjoy a happy life。 The fisherman simply turns him down because he has been living that kind of happy life now。    

  This story makes every one of us look at the ultimate question of happiness closer and deeper。 Do we need to tell others how to be happy? Is getting rich the only way to be a happy person? Does earning a lot of money surely bring an intense feeling of happiness? Happiness is a largely related with individual perception; and there is definitely no need for us to reshape others’ lives in the name of bringing them happiness。 Furthermore; being rich does not necessarily bring happiness; if we cannot control ourselves to spend money in the right way。 Finally; to travel happily and hopefully is equal to and even better than to arrive。 It is not wise at all to sacrifice youth; health or today’s happiness just for a bright future in our dreams。    

  Happiness is a feeling。 We go a thousand miles and spend many years to pursue what we actually can grasp today。 Around us there are too many people who are busy all day; and those who are smart enough to enjoy life are always few。    

  点评:    

  这篇文章分为三段。第一段写得非常简洁,这一段很能体现出我们总结概括的能力。该段只有两句话,突出描写了美国人的意图和墨西哥渔民截然相反的态度。    

  第二段是核心段落。第一句直接点出了该文讨论的主题:幸福。而后三句话连续三个问题,对文中以美国人为代表的一大批人的观点表示质疑。后四句给出回答:第五句说幸福与个人的感觉相关;第六句说变得富有不一定能带来幸福;第七、八句最耐人寻味:快乐地、充满希望地旅行甚至比到达更好,为了梦想中的光明未来而牺牲自己的青春、健康或今天的幸福是不明智的。其中第七句暗引了苏格兰作家Robert Louis Stevenson的名句:To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive。    

  最后一段做结:幸福是一种感觉。我们跨越千里,等待多年所追逐的其实就在身边。匆匆忙忙的人总是太多,能享受生活的人却寥寥无几啊。    

  心得:    

  如果提纲中给出的要求是阐释含义并给出评论,这类文章是比较难写的。这篇文章大家一定要细细琢磨,领悟其中的深刻含义。    

  Direction 22    

  Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:    

  1。 describe the picture;    

  2。 interpret the meaning of the picture;    

  3。 draw your conclusion。    

  You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。    

  审题:    

  《井干方知水可贵》该图画以简洁的笔触说明了深刻的道理,这类文章考察的可能性是相当大的。    

  Sample:    

  The picture focuses on a person standing by a well。 Looking at the empty barrel at hand; he sighs; “My God; there is no water at all。 I should not have wasted it。”    

  We never know the worth of water till the well is dry。 Similarly; we never realize the worth of the best things in life until they are lost。 When we are young; some of us bear a destination in mind and try to reach it at all costs。 In the due process; we either lose health or our friends—even if we reach that destination at last; will we be happy? Others always think God is not fair to them—they are so frustrated that they can not accumulate the courage to change their lives for the better。 When youth bees history; their world will be even colder and more hopeless。    

  Many of the best things in the world are just in our own hands。 It is certainly not easy to realize this point; and even more difficult to cherish them to the uttermost。 If we realize the value of youth; health and friends; we will be among the happiest persons of the world。    

  点评:    

  这篇文章的布局相当简单,共分三段。第一段描述图画。第二段阐释含义,也就是说明其中蕴涵的深刻道理。第三段下结论。    

  第一段非常简洁。第二段共有六句话,第一句话一针见血,非常关键。第二句是类推,颇具哲理。第三句和第四句说我们在向着目标奋进的过程中常常失去了宝贵的东西,如健康、朋友。第五句话说有些人慨叹命运的不公。第六句话说当青春失去时,世界将变得冰冷无望。第三段是结语,共分三句话。首先说世上许多最好的东西实际上就在我们手中;然后说理解到这点是不容易的,而做到就更不容易了;最后说如果我们意识到了青春、健康和朋友的价值,我们就是最幸福的人了。    

  心得:    

  看到这副图画,关键是建立表面的含义和隐藏深刻的含义之间的联系。“井干方知水可贵”可推衍至人生中可贵的东西,如青春、健康和友情等。如果平时多思考、多写作,考试时即使遇到不同的题目,也能快速反应,找到正确的应对方法。    

  这篇文章的重要特点就是列举,将具体图画与抽象的人生中可贵的东西建立类比联系之后,一定要举出具体的有代表性的这类可贵的事物。第二段分两个方面来说,先说了健康与朋友,后说了青春。第三段中一定要与第二段中直接呼应,将这三者再列举一次才能取得理想的效果。    

  Direction 23    

  Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:    

  1。 describe the picture;    

  2。 interpret the meaning of the picture;    

  3。 make your ments。    

  You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。    

  审题:    

  这道题的出题方式我们已遇到多次了,是“描述图画+阐释含义+作出评论”的模式,这种模式在写作中的灵活程度比较大。    

  Sample:    

  In the picture; a young man asks an old man; “What can be got without pains in this world?” The old man replies; “There is only one thing: poverty。”    

  Looking at the drawing; I think a lot。 It tells us that we have to make strenuous efforts whenever we want to be successful in a particular field。 How can a person achieve his ultimate goal without longtime practices and continuous attempts?    

  A good case in point is mountaineering。 Nobody is born a good mountain climber; and one can only bee a skilled one after countless injuries。 The scenery at the mountaintop is fantastic; but the road to the summit is always rough and full of hardships and dangers。 Isn’t scientific research the same? Countless sleepless nights; thousands of failures and even more—all of these are part of a scientist’s life。 Only a few of them can make great scientific breakthroughs; and all of these people are the most persevering。    

  On the contrary; if a person is determined to live an idle life; and wait for God to put something in his hands; then that thing should and could only be poverty。 If a person has neither ideal nor the determination to live better and let others live better; his existence is not meaningful at all。    

  点评:    

  这篇文章共分四段:首段是描述图画;次段是总结寓意;第三段是举例说明;第四段是下结论。该文最引人注目之处是第三个段落,整段举了两个例子。我们在多年的考研阅卷中发现,大多数同学的举例是不成功的。举例子要具备两个条件才能成功,一是典型——既要紧扣主题,又要具有代表性,能够震撼人心,切忌不痛不痒;二是精练——用简洁的话语表达深刻的意
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